EGBFan wrote:
I boldly put in some of those details about TJ (being less ambigous there
), quite prepared for Fritz to ask questions and maybe want to tweak a few things (I'm thinking now specifically of what I said about her childhood home). But no, all good. Maybe he just figured he'd bow to my superior knowledge (of London).
Well, yeah, that's pretty much it. You gave me a lot more detail than I ever would have thought of asking for. I think it threaded the needle (also being less ambiguous) between noting that TJ and Emi did, indeed, attend the same school at the same time without overly tying the two together. I realized we already have most of the cast knowing each other to some extent when the team formed in June, so I didn't want to stray too far from her being the "outsider" in sorta the same way Winston started as one in the original team. But at the same time, it does give us a building block to future stories. Maybe the story of Jess and Hayden's wedding needs some new material in light of this? (That's completely your call, of course)
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This is an important step for the young ghostbusting team in GBOT continuity. Glad you got around to finishing it.
Kind of like the last couple stories...it seemed like once I could get my head clear enough from all the other problems I'm dealing with it actually came together pretty quick. Next story's a little bigger in scope, but I'm really hoping to get it out before the end of the year.
The title is "The Monster of Lungbarrow", it takes place in 2023, and that's all I'm spilling for now.