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By Jason Knetge

February 2008--Timeline Year Twenty Six
Missy Oliver's brother is seeing a ghost cat, and has been thrown in an asylum. Missy is the only one who knows he's not insane--but who's she gonna call to prove it?

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pleas parden my speling but I'm a littel dislexik and can't tipe whel

Excellent work, my friend! Great Job!

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I'll get you next time, Gadget! Next Time!- Dr. Claw, Inspector Gadget ending credits

We never would've lost if you koopaling clowns had tried to wake me up! Whose idea was this midnight attack?!- King Koopa, True Colors

thanks , I'm glad some one likes it

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pleas parden my speling but I'm a littel dislexik and can't tipe whel

You are so welcome!

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I'll get you next time, Gadget! Next Time!- Dr. Claw, Inspector Gadget ending credits

We never would've lost if you koopaling clowns had tried to wake me up! Whose idea was this midnight attack?!- King Koopa, True Colors

I thought this was a charming little story, told from a different perspective than most. It's a little bit of how the public sees the company; to some they're heroes, to other's they're frauds. And it's a great example of, to the people involved, "small" cases are just as important as the "Lord Badass Is About To Destroy The World!!!!" ones.

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thanks I'm glad you liked it . After Belmont posted some where that he would like to see more story's like ( The Death Of the Ghostbusters West Coast ) . I felt a little proud and decided to get around to the others I had in my head .

The hole genesis of this story was that I just wanted to do something where the GBWC jump in and out , before any one knows what just happened .

also i wanted to do something where someone basically was put through hell b/c now one believed .

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pleas parden my speling but I'm a littel dislexik and can't tipe whel