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Author:  Mick Nielson [ March 30th, 2010, 7:24 pm ]
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The Subway of Doom, Part One
By Mick Nielson

March 2010--Timeline Year Twenty-Eight
Some ancient Indian artifacts have resurfaced in L.A., that doesn't sound all that scary, does it? Then wait until you find out what that really means...

Author:  Fritz [ March 31st, 2010, 9:07 am ]
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I liked this one a great deal--a lot of building tension, helped by the "flash forward" opening which tells you straight out something big and nasty is about to happen.

I liked Mick's character development to Fritz and Chelsea, though I did suggest a small change from his original draft: he wrote them getting a puppy. I changed it to a kitten to be a little closer to reality--I got a black cat in Real Life just a few months ago. Who does, indeed, leave the foulest piles I've ever encountered. We've changed his cat food and it still reeks--I guess it's just him. :lol:

Author:  Mick Nielson [ April 2nd, 2010, 7:09 pm ]
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I just love that, out of everything else going on in the story, everyone has the most to say about the fact that Fritz's family bought a cat. I now realize what the key is to getting people to read fan fics again... Characters buying animals. :lol:

Author:  jason knetge [ April 3rd, 2010, 12:24 am ]
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that and poles. remember how happy we were when you pt a fire pole in the GBWC, LOL

Author:  Fritz [ April 3rd, 2010, 9:32 am ]
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Author:  Mick Nielson [ April 3rd, 2010, 9:23 pm ]
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Well the poles were LONG overdue, I mean, whats the fun of being a Ghostbuster if you dont get to slide down the Firepoles?! I couldnt be part of a franchise that didnt have firepoles.

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